I enjoyed watching you're amv i found it mostly well made !
THe synch and the story is expressive you have quite a good video quality so it's okay ...
The problems are some lips who aren't so good and sometimes you use too much effets (like the cross part) and there we have some problems to understand what's going on in your video !
But the overall is very good as I say i like you're amv and i'll probably keep it on my HD good work
ps-> sorry for my english v_v"