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PostSubject: [AMV] Zoro vs Ryuma! Swordsmen in Flames!!![full]   Thu 14 Apr - 23:16

Yoo minna, few are likely to meet me right here in the forum, vLex then
gave me an post idea some AMV's (thanks vLex ^ ^), so here I am, I only I
did amv ​​the of zoro just because he is cool, so I hope you like, also critical to
see where I need to improve ^ ^.

Anime: One Piece

Music: Blow me away

Band: Breaking Benjamin

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PostSubject: Re: [AMV] Zoro vs Ryuma! Swordsmen in Flames!!![full]   Thu 14 Apr - 23:53

So I prefer to comment on a full amv, it's better when you show us a full amv that a preview^^

Where to start, I guess with the beginning XD The slow part at the beginning, I didn't like it, i'm not sure why, maybe because of the text that I didn't like or the choice of scenes. After, the part with the scans(manga) I thought its was a really good idea(it's sad that you didn't put more stuff like that). At 30sec your lips sync was kind of okay, but just in the back you can see Zoro talking and the lips really didn't go with the lyrics. You should have taken a better scene for the background of your mask. And then you got text, that one is okay, but you don't seem to use it anywhere else, so it's kind of nowhere. And you should work your lips sync(the first one was "okay" but the rest were not good). At 1min42 the TV Effect, it's not pretty and feel kind of useless. At 1min26 to 1min34 you added some kind of FX on the original scene, I thought it was a nice idea, try to work on that and should turn really cool =)

And for the rest of the amv, it's just same transition that you repeat over and over again, try different things and work more on your sync with the music.

Hope to see more from you and Good luck for your next amv Wink



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PostSubject: Re: [AMV] Zoro vs Ryuma! Swordsmen in Flames!!![full]   Fri 15 Apr - 2:37

VLex Thanks, I'll try to do better next, us 1min42 tried the effect that combined with the music at the time, is that he I seen an effect on an amv, plus the effect was very good, tried to make one like it more went bad, do not know much of adobe after effects still,I need to learn more things and try to do better in my next amv, thanks for the comment ^ ^ vLex
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