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PostSubject: [Action] VividRadiation    Mon 25 Feb - 0:06

Drawing power straight from the source of the whole world's energy, these girls are Radioactive and will fight anyone or anything that threatens it!



Song: Radioactive
Artist: Imagine Dragons
Anime: Vividred Operation
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation    Mon 25 Feb - 23:45

Not bad but it lacks transitions/impact ...
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation    Tue 26 Feb - 1:08

@Draga wrote:
Not bad but it lacks transitions/impact ...

If you could elaborate with some suggestions to how I could improve, that would be wonderful.
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] VividRadiation    Fri 1 Mar - 19:28

Hi!

I agree with Draga, you could have speeded up a little during the chorus, it was kinda slow, too much cuts too and your cam moves could have been cleaner if you had used better the blur.
It's not "bad", but it's just not really interesting since there're so many cuts and a little boring because we're never totally amazed by your flow of scenes since that's too slow

Keep it up Wink
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