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PostSubject: [Romance] [PoggieZas + TUFB] NOT JUST A LIE   Mon 3 Mar - 0:18

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PostSubject: Re: [Romance] [PoggieZas + TUFB] NOT JUST A LIE   Tue 4 Mar - 9:02

good job poggie :3
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PostSubject: Re: [Romance] [PoggieZas + TUFB] NOT JUST A LIE   Wed 5 Mar - 6:55

Olaaaa!

0:53 dissolve transition wasn't very pretty.

also i noticed, in the contrary of many editor who haves too much static elements, you have TOOmuch camera moves, it goes in all axes and position. it looks like when watching Blair project D:. just a linear move can make wonders, don't go berserk XD.

otherwise there's a bunch of varieties of transitions (unperfected, but quite an effort) and it's fine to watch. it ends a bit abruptly though ^^.


Good luck poggie !


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PostSubject: Re: [Romance] [PoggieZas + TUFB] NOT JUST A LIE   Mon 10 Mar - 4:16

Hello

I didn't really like it, I felt like watching the same cam move through the whole video. A lot, real lot of dezooms with fades with them, you need to vary more your transitions and to make them a bit cleaner, I mean you don't need to make fades everywhere.

If we forget about that, it wasn't too bad but yeah nothing really interesting to keep the watcher focused.
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