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PostSubject: [Dance] Motionless   Mon 3 Mar - 16:39

Hardest 72 hours ever, not really satisfied with the outcome but who cares c:
Sorry for the renderbugs (frames just popup somewhere else than thy should o-o)

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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Motionless   Mon 3 Mar - 21:49

not bad Wink Good job men .
good luck for the classification
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Motionless   Mon 3 Mar - 22:49

Thank you *-* yeah luck is what i need Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Motionless   Wed 5 Mar - 6:25

some cool scenes choice !

main issue for me was some of your cuts: your anime switch have a lot of different color pallette (0:16 for example: very detailed rain/water to very bright blue sky) too, it's kinda hard for the eye, rotos and transitions are your friends in this situation! or change of scene placement.

p.s:the "stairs scenes" at the beginning of the build-up was an EXCELLENT idea. it's sad you didn't continued all that way before the chorus drops. "Girl who leapt through time" would have been a no-brainer on this.

Good luck !
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Motionless   Wed 5 Mar - 17:04

Thank you for this constructive critique m8! will pay attetion on that in my next amv c:
And glad you liked this scene, i was afraid of it being too long.
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Motionless   Wed 5 Mar - 23:14

Hello

I'll agree with PBE overall. I thought it wasn't too bad but most of your transitions could have been cleaner and also smoother in the cam moves, it's still not natural enough at some parts. And overall the video didn't fit the song's beats enough imo, so yeah as most of the dance videos, yours wasn't terrible, it's just that it had more flaws than the others. But I'm sure you'll overcome this in no time if you pay attention to them. Good job and keep it up Wink
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PostSubject: Re: [Dance] Motionless   Thu 6 Mar - 16:46

Thanks MDL, i am glad that it's not that bad. I will work on my editing and will hopefully place better next year ! Razz
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