This clip has a lot of potential, i liked the visual ideas and the music./anime combination.
But to me the fx lack a lot of integration most of the time it could be more visually blended+ addition of some more color correction less saturated would also add a better atmosphere.
I also thought the twixtor was kinda useless and with a lot of warping too bad for that.
Still in the meantime i believe the video has potential so do you as an editor with more finition on your fx work, im sure you can come up with something realy interesting !
Congrats on your placement though, cya ~