I didn't really like it, the flow is ok but it's your typical Afro Samurai video. Apart from that your transitions looked kinda rough, you're not paying them enough thought, it looks like you're forcing them on scenes that don't work together and the fades make the image look dirtier.
Another thing that bothered me was the lack of consistency in your effects and the fonts you used. There're not really any links that would form a visual identity.
Still a decent watch, congratz on 2nd place