The intro and FX in the first 30s or so were really nice to see. Now what happens if we strip that off and just make cuts with the exact same cam moves during the whole video?
It's painfully obvious you should focus more on your editing, you should make a tiny bit more variations in your transitions, it's fine to reuse some presets cam moves when they are good and relevant but not for each change of scene.
Moreover, the last part supposed to be more dynamic doesn't feel all too different, it needed more impacts.
Good luck in the contest