Very solid editing and scene selection in the beginning. But it starts being a bit sketchier afterwars where you used a lot more fades and the synch is more approximative. The scene selection also kinda makes less sense, we see characters that have nothing to do with the original story you presented and overall it gets more generic. You also have some blending frames here and there that are always a nuisance.
Good job nevertheless, it's good but had more potential imo