The first part was an interesting take on the category, I liked the choice of "weird little girls horrified" animes. Then it became less mixed and then only Kara no kyoukai so the atmosphere broke down.
On the technical side, you should avoid making too many cam moves that are going left then right, try keeping a consistency in the movements. Also, I noticed your glitches FX are mostly from vegas FX, they're looking a bit amateurish nowadays so you might want to go for the next step or to rely more on the scenes provided in your animes to make nice synchs.
Good luck in the contest!