Not bad, the video is rather clean if we forget the meme part which is acceptable given the song haha
The TV Fx might have been a bit too obvious, it looks old fashioned. The lip flaps were really bothering, especially in the first part. Also some accelerated scenes of Honoka are too easy to spot, the video could have been more dynamic by having a higher flow of scenes, not by speeding up some.
But overall it isn't bad, good job for taking this song, good luck!