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PostSubject: [Action] Sukiya - Battleground   Mon 27 Feb - 13:58

Hope you enjoy my entry this year xD

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PostSubject: Re: [Action] Sukiya - Battleground   Tue 28 Feb - 20:51

Hey,

I didn't really like this one. First of all I think the 21:9 aspect ratio didn't match the mood at all. The scene selection was especially random and it was hard to stay focused with so many different animes that didn't fit well together.
The audio cuts are very disturbing and the voice overs were kinda pointless.
Finally the masks are really ugly, if you don't have time to mask correctly, I think it's better not to do them at all and rely on simpler techniques. By the way, the twitch at the beginning which are the same, regardless of the scene on which it's used, weren't really good because of the obvious repetition.

I see that you must have put a lot of effort in it and I may have come out a bit agressive by just stating what I thought, I'm sorry I'm commenting a lot of videos today xD I'm sure you can do a cleaner edit, keep it up!!
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] Sukiya - Battleground   Wed 1 Mar - 17:27

@MagicDarkLight wrote:
Hey,

I didn't really like this one. First of all I think the 21:9 aspect ratio didn't match the mood at all. The scene selection was especially random and it was hard to stay focused with so many different animes that didn't fit well together.
The audio cuts are very disturbing and the voice overs were kinda pointless.
Finally the masks are really ugly, if you don't have time to mask correctly, I think it's better not to do them at all and rely on simpler techniques. By the way, the twitch at the beginning which are the same, regardless of the scene on which it's used, weren't really good because of the obvious repetition.

I see that you must have put a lot of effort in it and I may have come out a bit agressive by just stating what I thought, I'm sorry I'm commenting a lot of videos today xD I'm sure you can do a cleaner edit, keep it up!!

Hey, thanks for the comments. I can see what you mean in those points. I wasnt sure if I should keep the borders or not but it was late and my brain was no longer functioning and so I just went ahead with it xD. However, there may be a few rushed masks but I do think that most of them are cleanly masked though.

I will definitely keep trying to get better Smile
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