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PostSubject: [Action] [Nebula Team- Em] Our Fight   Sun 4 Mar - 22:48

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PostSubject: Re: [Action] [Nebula Team- Em] Our Fight   Sat 10 Mar - 12:38

Hey Em !

Nice surprise since I didnt know you before and you actually made one of the vid dat I remember more from the IC.

Probably cuz of your combo anime/music, in a first place, I thought this song didnt match with Magi but more I watch it, more I appreciate 

I really like you verse part, I think you edited those moment of the music very well, but unfortunatly on the chorus I thing you went a little bit angry x'D Your debit of scene is crazy and kinda out of rhythm, dats the bigger problem of your video.

Other point I didnt really like when I was watching, that kind of compo :
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I think that doesnt fit your amv and the music at all, it killing the dark ambiance dat you tried to put before :/

Lets talk about good point now, like I said, I really like your verse part, especially this one :


And its cool dat even in the end you still putting effort in your video !
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Sooo here my conclusion :

I can feel dat you're more confortable on the calm part of the song. You tried to do too much on the chorus imo, and its too bad cuz Im sure you could have got a better rank !
Still, I can see alot of effort put in this video, you just need a little bit of precision in your editing and im sure you'll do some really good stuff  

Anyway, Good job for you ranking Em 
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PostSubject: Re: [Action] [Nebula Team- Em] Our Fight   Sat 10 Mar - 13:08

WOOOOOOOAH Thank you so much dude!!!!!! I didn't expect personal feedback and honestly, I was SO happy last night to have placed so high.
This is actually one of the first action edits I have done; so it was really a challenge for me :') This is probably I come across as editing better in the verses parts; I am more accustomed to telling a story through scenes which follow on from one another, so I found the actual chorus parts really hard xDD
But honestly, I am so happy with my place, even happier that I got personal feedback from one of my editing idols [you] and I already cannot wait until next year, when I will aim higher :'D

Thank you Luciole! <3
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